Duration: 03:36 minutes Upload Time: 07-08-18 14:25:36 User: yaffle :::: Favorites |
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just moved to the edge of town to an old house it's run down in the dark dusty attic I found a spirit of female persuasion I was single and alone she was floating on her own had the most charming groan a natural super ghost equation like a sheet blowing in the breeze an unearthly shape I wanted to squeeze this ethereal to me was a tease was she real or imagination she watched me smoke watched me shave followed me silent on air waves when I undressed she laughed and waved watching my see through temptation the flesh is willing but the spirit is fleeting she drifts above while I'm overheating sometimes she brushed my arm I felt the chill run down my spine this flour pale female charm I was unable to undertwine when she wore her ghost shorts and sauntered and shifted her weight the blood rushed down by quarts a desire I couldn't consummate rolling around the bed with an unearthly feeling always she was watching from the ceiling hired a mystic obscure had a seance night when he talked to her she said sorry I was not her type the flesh is willing but the spirit is fleeting she drifts above while I'm overheating Music and brainstorming: http://www.youtube.com/ournationalspace . |
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UglyLarry ::: Favorites this is some nice animation 07-08-26 21:35:04 _____________________________________________________ | |
squazimo ::: Favorites i've seen the wristwatch somewhere before. groovy toons and another brilliant job - 8 stars 07-08-20 15:47:35 _____________________________________________________ | |
alexhighrise ::: Favorites a tragic and deeply moving love story...bravo 07-08-20 04:26:30 _____________________________________________________ | |
yaffle ::: Favorites thank you so much, this comment moved me. 07-08-20 06:56:00 _____________________________________________________ | |
Sugartalker ::: Favorites Awesome job yaffle! 07-08-20 03:05:06 _____________________________________________________ | |
yaffle ::: Favorites Thanks a lot, a few late nights doing this one. 07-08-20 06:53:43 _____________________________________________________ | |
samtwist ::: Favorites Hehe. Such detail in just two minutes. You have a fantastic talent in story telling 07-08-19 16:10:18 _____________________________________________________ | |
yaffle ::: Favorites Thanks samtwist. The song did most of the work for me. 07-08-19 20:37:12 _____________________________________________________ | |
bartolemeo ::: Favorites Another great one, loved it... 5*. Terrific song for a story as well. 07-08-18 22:45:10 _____________________________________________________ | |
yaffle ::: Favorites Yep, it made my job a lot easier, the song is practically an aural storyboard. 07-08-19 07:35:44 _____________________________________________________ | |
sirnubenegra ::: Favorites nice! bro! i wil try to make some now. 07-08-18 22:15:11 _____________________________________________________ | |
yaffle ::: Favorites making some animation? it's about time. 07-08-19 07:34:29 _____________________________________________________ | |
sirnubenegra ::: Favorites not a super long one though. 07-08-20 00:29:05 _____________________________________________________ | |
JustA11en ::: Favorites The mice were a nice touch. 5 stars again. 07-08-18 21:59:00 _____________________________________________________ | |
yaffle ::: Favorites I like the vermin too, cheers. 07-08-19 07:33:47 _____________________________________________________ | |
ariestheramone ::: Favorites Your animation looked like it took a whole lot of work. But it was worth it, and the timing, everything was great. Gotta love the lyrics too! 07-08-18 21:46:24 _____________________________________________________ | |
FunToRelate ::: Favorites most impressive! <b>five stars</b> poor guy, he didn't stand a ghost of chance to win her love. 07-08-18 21:21:23 _____________________________________________________ | |
yaffle ::: Favorites Cheers! That guy wouldn't say boo to a goose. 07-08-18 21:41:06 _____________________________________________________ | |
papackar ::: Favorites Wow, that was great. A lot of work there. Where'd the music come from? 07-08-18 21:06:51 _____________________________________________________ | |
yaffle ::: Favorites Thanks, papacker, long time no see. The music is by a user on youtube called ournationalspace, link is at the bottom of the vid description. 07-08-18 21:39:04 _____________________________________________________ |
Monday, August 27, 2007
a spirit of female persuasion
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